I just reviewed this draft, see below. Thought it worked as a 'one-liner' and don't have any patience today for any hard considerations over these articles. Housekeeping?
These Dancers may look fit, and sexy, but they are also attempting to become 'intelligent.' This approach has been known to produce 'mixed results' at best in most of the ascripted participants. Do not, I repeat, do not become chastened, by the boorish chorus who decry schooling by trusted family members, as well as the state government.
